make a determined effort meaning in Chinese

奋勉

Make a determined effort no longer then , try hard no longer ; lost the desire to do better then ; had a good news not to wish to tell others then , allow good thing , annihilation is in bottom of the heart , become permanent memory . . . we look forward to the parent and teachers to be able to be praised to us , even if be of an a the word of a praise , encouraged eyes , sincerity , smile . . . but they make us disappointed however , blow our joyance , in this colourful world , little a warmth
于是不再发愤，不再努力；于是失去了上进心；于是有了喜讯不愿告诉别人，让美好的东西，湮没在心底，成为永久的记忆… …我们一次次盼望家长与老师们能给我们表扬，哪怕是一句赞扬的话、一个鼓励的眼神、一个真诚的微笑… …可他们却一次次让我们失望，一次次吹走我们的喜悦，在这个五彩缤纷的世界里，少了一份温馨。